First Cut Feedback

Today we presented our first cut Liability music video to our peers within the class, throughout the course of this we received both positive and negative feedback. The positive aspects of this were that they understood the narrative clearly and that it fitted in well with the genre and the tone of the music we had chosen, they also commented on how the choice of having multiple uses of slow motion clips worked realty well and it helped reflect the tone of the song.
 

However some of the negative comments included the fact that our choice of song was very slow and it did not engaged them to want to watch more in other words it was a bit dreary and dull, they also commented on how the beginning clip was not in time with the music and needed to be re shot. Our peers also disliked the ending of narrative as they expected more of a twist.
 

In conclusion to receiving this feedback we are concerned about some of the feedback we received, but we are going to try and save the video to try and make it more intriguing.